Showing posts with label SoP. Show all posts
Showing posts with label SoP. Show all posts

Thursday, January 31, 2013

Statement of Purpose

So, the SoP is a big point of argument amongst the masses. Some of us are very dry and professional. Some of us are more casual and conversational. People get in with all sorts of SoPs, but I thought I might share mine. This was my final draft of my SoP (please nobody steal it, that would be bad) for this year. I am not going to post my SoP from last year since I didn't get an interview, but if someone really wants to see it, feel free to message me and I am happy to share if you want to compare my two statements.

Again DO NOT STEAL THIS it is not good enough to steal, so just don't. Plagiarism isn't cool.

In a Kyoto crepe shop during March 2008, I had my nose buried in my first manga in Japanese. A man’s voice called out, “Are you reading that?” I paused and turned around to see a Japanese man smiling at me. I smiled back and managed an awkward “Watashi wa Amerika-jin desu.” We chatted in English as I told him that I only knew hiragana, but was trying to learn Japanese. The man’s smile grew as I explained; he was as excited to understand my interest in his culture, as I was to learn about his culture. Years later, I am surprised to remember this exchange more vividly than most of the other experiences I had in Japan.
I discovered Japan as a child through Pokémon and other children’s anime and manga. As I grew older, my interests expanded as I learned more of the history of traditional Japanese clothes, food, and music. My knowledge of Japanese culture is mostly self-taught, but I have been chasing better understanding for years, which is a large part of why I wish to travel to and live in Japan. I have joined the Society for Creative Anachronism, a group that studies and recreates medieval society from around the world, where I have had the chance to increase my own knowledge and the knowledge of those I meet, in classes I have attended and classes I have taught.
I decided to be a teacher when I was in preschool and began my interest in the JET Program while I was still in elementary school. I began by teaching my peers to tie shoes, tutored other students when I was older, and edited papers and songs for friends. The classes that I enjoyed the most had a constant exchange of ideas through workshops or roundtable discussions. My interest in working on the JET Program helped me take a special interest in my course focused on adolescent literacy, as we focused in on how to teach English to non-speakers and low-level speakers. Once I began working, I learned quickly and started training other new employees on the cash register, in customer service, folding, and displays. The employees I trained frequently received positive customer comments and lasted longer in the job than other new employees.
To complete my Education program, I was required to take four courses and an internship. For my internship, I created a Writing Center at Triton Regional High School. The experience was unforgettable. I found my strengths as a teacher: I worked hard to know the students and address them in ways that suited them best, and I was happy to take all the time required to answer every question and complete every assignment.  In my position, I worked one school day a week, when students could get help one-on-one. I also made sure to be available via email. I spent hours reading papers, writing comments, editing grammar, and learning the best ways I could teach the students to be better writers. It was the most fulfilling job I had ever performed, reaffirming that teaching is the profession I wish to pursue. By the end of the semester, I had helped students improve their writing abilities and their re-writing abilities. And, I had learned to be a better teacher with the help of those experiences and those students.
With each education course I took, my passion for teaching expanded. I found new ways to interest students, new ways to incorporate my interests in my teaching, and new ways to understand students. A part of this was getting my TESOL certification, where I learned new techniques that I look forward to using in teaching English as a second language. My experiences will help me to work alongside the Japanese English teachers. Through JET, I can share my culture, help teach others English, and learn about another culture and education style. Participating in JET will allow me to build memories and better understanding for others, as well as myself, like I found in that Kyoto crepe shop. The more I expand my own experiences and knowledge, the better I will be as a teacher on the JET Program.

Thursday, June 21, 2012

Woo!! Helping People!!!

So, I just wanted to put a big thank you out there because today, I got my first paper that someone wanted me to help with! I hope that I was helpful to her and I hope that other people will use me to improve their writing too! ^_^

Here are some helpful things, if you want to ask me for help. These will help me edit better for your needs and limit my feedback, so that you get more of what you want.
1) What country you are from, also, if you give me the prompt for your country, that may help as well.
2) What kind of editing you want. Do you want just grammar? General feedback? Both? I can do a full edit, which would include grammar, a comments section, and some general tips.
3) Rewrite help? If you want help writing a section because you know something sounds funny, you could send me the sentence with the paragraph and I could give suggestions for the specific section to make your writing better. However, I will not do this for a full paper because it is a LOT of work and then there would be too much me in the paper, when JET wants you.
4) Which sections. If you want me to read your whole paper, but focus on specific paragraphs, numbers the paragraphs and tell me what you want extra help with.
5) Just so you know, when I read and edit papers for people I consider to be peers, I treat it like a writing workshop. I read your paper once and make comments (the comments section). I read your paper a second time for grammar and a couple comments on weird/difficult to read sentences. I skim your paper a third and final time to check for final edits. I then add a couple comments on things that I think in general about your paper. I can be very harsh, my family thinks that I am the high school teacher everyone hates, but is much better off for having. I definitely don't hold blows for peers, unless you ask me to; I want your writing to be the best it can be and coddling you doesn't help anyone.

And here are some general writing/editing tips from me, in case you don't want my help, but you do need some help on your own.
1) Read aloud. Checking for commas this way is easiest. In fact, when I write, I speak under my breath, so that I know where I pause and need commas. Also, this makes it much easier to catch weird/difficult sentences.
2) Show, don't tell. Don't tell me a list of things you did. Show me a story, paint the scene, so that I see you, not listen to you talk about you.
3) Cut excess words. Rewrite sentences and see if you can remove words by changing verb tense or sentence order or whatever else, just cut the excess, so that you have room for the important stuff.
4) Use details! Details make it about you and not a motivational speech. No one wants your generic paper about the necessities of teaching and uniqueness of Japan; JET already knows all this crap and now they want to know about you, your experiences, and what you have to bring to the table.

That's it for yet another post about edits and SoPs and my writing opinions. Please, more people send me papers ^_^

And again:
THANK YOU FOR USING ME!!!! I enjoy helping out and having something useful to do with my time! This is a perfect opportunity for people who want feedback on last year's SoP because I am currently unemployed and have tons of time to read and edit your papers.

Saturday, June 16, 2012

Editing Available

So, I know most people who have started thinking about the next JET application have started thinking about their SoP. This may sound suspicious or weird or whatever, but I love editing (I've mentioned before). Point being? If anyone ever has an SoP they would like an outside reader to view, I would love to help. I can help with everything from grammar to formatting to style or I can just give you some feedback on how it came off. But, I wanted to put it out there that I would be happy to help any applicants with their SoP as time goes on ^_^ I know that I like to get as much feedback as I can.


Also, I do know that it has been mentioned to not share your SoP because someone is bound to steal it. I swear I wouldn't (especially since I've already been working on my SoP for months). If you want me to read it, leave a comment, find me on the JET forums (chrisd928), or email it to me at gohangirl9@gmail.com. I agree with everyone saying not to make it public, some ass hole will steal your SoP, I just promise I'm not that ass hole :P

Mostly, I enjoy reading people's work and I adore editing. So, if you want a reader and want to help me have something to do, I'm available ^_^

Tuesday, June 12, 2012

Formatting Nazi Christine

So, I am that formatting nazi in class that irritates everyone. Lots of people are sticklers for grammar and spelling, but a lot of people ignore format. When you format your pages, you give a first impression by the way you have set up your page. Make sure that you indent your paragraphs the same every time, even in bullet points, make sure that you have an equal amount of spaces entered or you look sloppy. Make sure that you have your margins correct. Generally speaking, you want double spaced, 12pt Times New Roman.

Now, I know that a lot of people will think I'm crazy, but I'm not (well, I am, but not about this). I would love to work for a publisher as an editor someday and I love editing other people's work, but if I ever want to do all of these things justice, I have to be on top of the small details. In one class, the professor did a rubric, which we were supposed to critique and explain our issues; I said that it had some professionalism issues because the different details weren't all the same in the indents, some were caps and some lower case, it was inconsistent. You don't want that to be the image you convey.

Here's a brief list of little things to check on your formatting to look extra professional:
1) Indent one tab at the start of every paragraph OR add an extra space between paragraphs and no indent.
2) If you use Microsoft Word, it adds a 10pt space every time you hit Enter; remove this. You don't want that extra gap, unless you aren't using indents.
3) DOUBLE SPACE!!!!
4) 12pt Times New Roman. I know it's boring, but it looks professional and straightforward.
5) If you are submitting a specific document, make sure to check their guidelines, especially for margins and page numbers.
6) Set your margins first. Don't write your paper and then change the margins, you could discover that your paper is too long or not long enough.

For the JET SoP, they give you a pretty simple guideline:
7) Statement of Purpose (3 photocopies): This is an essay, in English, of not more than two 8½" x 11" (or A4) pages, typewritten in 12 point font and double-spaced with one-inch margins. Please note that anything beyond the required two pages will not be read.Please type your name and page number (1of 2, 2 of 2) on each page. Be sure to include two copies of your statement in your application package.
Use a standard paper, 1" margins, double-spaced, 12pt. It does not list where to place your name and page number, so I recommend the top right corner. Generally speaking, you want this in the bottom right, but this acts as your header and makes it easier to reference you as the writer. Also, on the off-chance that something happens and your app gets mixed up, they can find your stuff super easy with the name/page number in the top right.

I hope this is helpful ^_^

Sunday, May 20, 2012

The Statement of Purpose

I'm sure that I will write more than one post on this, but this is definitely something I believe you want to start early. I started a week ago. Thus far, I've made two versions and have two drafts of the first one. The important thing is to start early and give yourself time for drafts. When you draft a paper, especially one that may be personal to you, you get attached, so you need time to separate yourself  to re-write.

On the Aspiring JETs forums, I've had some brilliant advice posted. So I am going to list out some of the advice I got there and some advice of my own. Some of this is specifically directed towards the JET SoP, but most of it is applicable to writing in general.

1) Write everything you want to write. It's easier to cut out something than to regret not writing it at all.
2) Start early and do multiple drafts.
3) Write multiple papers so that you can pick what you like and see what works and isn't.
4) Read it out loud. Reading out loud allows you to find things that you may miss when reading in your head. Things like commas, wordy or confusing sentences, and just bad sentences stand out more when you speak.
5) Have friends and family read your paper. They won't assume the things you assume as the writer; they catch lots of things you don't.
6) Use details. When you get vague, you get boring. Details make it YOU isntead of any person off the street. But, don't get too detailed because then it gets dragged out and you end up wasting space.
7) Make sure that your voice is in the piece. Every writer has a voice and you want to stand out. Don't be TOO formal or TOO casual, it's about avoiding extremes; on one end you sound unprofessional and on the other you sound like a rock.
8) If you have a writing center or any resource to check your SoP, DO IT! That's what they are there for. I have a relative who used to work with JET and didn't ask for her to read my paper last year, but did this year (this was really dumb of me).
9) Use an anecdote. I always recommend having a personal story as the hook because it shows something of you that makes it more interesting.
10) HAVE A HOOK. Readers need to be caught, they are not forgiving, they are not the captive audience that you had in school.

I'm sure I'll have more advice later and more thoughts, but I'll post those when I have them.